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December and forever will sink into the backdrop, pulling curtains closed and resetting the stage for a never ending production where life’s lessons play roles of insignificant props, because how the actors stumbled upon entrance is all the more important (how they stutter on their closing line is ever so important) Scene by scene and salvation in the lowest notes, you pick apart the symphony’s tiniest of falabilites over miracles, didn’t anyone let you know (didn’t anyone sew) that there’s no such thing as broken, that these needles holding no thread only riddle your skin with more holes?

Oh, how you made it all seem so simple almost made me feel sorry for you.

January and all never’s will rise to reality anew, throwing bottomless  pitfalls with given one second escapes (until you realize that the end’s just another maze), wrongs and rights juxtaposed with personal gain, and greed will always weigh more on the scale. Watch closely as the balance tips, the sky will signify victories held over the cause (will shoot for stars and crash to the depths of hell just for the process between) and we’ll laugh together as malicious schemes will consume their creators, envelop us in well deserved sadistic irony until the first point gives hopes of going through it all again.

Oh, how you made it all seem so simple...
©2004-2009 ~withoutFaith
:iconwithoutfaith:

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I refuse to believe that it's less than it really seems

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:iconsonicspaz101:
Sarcastically wonderous.
Sam

--
Les brindilles et les pierres peuvent casser nos os, mais les mots casseront nos coeurs.
(thank you franky)

oh yeah...this is the coolest club for writers, personally, on D.A. :iconburn-p0etry:
:iconchrisiscliche:
Nicely done. I like the work of the vocabulary, and it's just this side of incomprehensible. It's somewhat abstract, but you can pull out the meaning if you look hard enough.

A question or two though?

Is December equated to the end?
And January to new beginnings?
:iconinteractiveperson:
the following really were well said!!

>where life’s lessons play roles of insignificant props
so true when looking back they mean little in terms of the over all production but yet necessary for the full experience. almost oxymornic in a sense.

>until you realize that the end’s just another maze
does it ever stop, or does your ability to comprehend stop, giving the false preminition that the end is just that and not another beginning....

>and we’ll laugh together as malicious schemes will consume their creators
i just love this line. brilliant and i feel this on a daily basis. i can't tell you how well that is written because it's just something that i feel so so strongly about.

well done!
:iconwithoutfaith:
December is the end, and a false sense of salvation through it, and January is the new begenning proving there's no saving grace here and the only thing up the road are more tragedies, but almost like they let you barely make it by just to see you go through it again.

Really glad you appreciated it =D
Thanks for the comment... anymore questions?
:iconsonicspaz101:
No, it doesn't suck. I'm a BIG fan of sarcasm, and use it every chance I get...just not when I comment. *smiles* I quite liked this one.
Sam

--
Les brindilles et les pierres peuvent casser nos os, mais les mots casseront nos coeurs.
(thank you franky)

oh yeah...this is the coolest club for writers, personally, on D.A. :iconburn-p0etry:
:iconwithoutfaith:
Thanks :) Any interpretations?
:iconsonicspaz101:
Talk about putting a girl on the spot...I don't have any at this moment...brain and thought process not really connecting at the moment. So, I promise you an interpretation by this afternoon.
Sam

--
Les brindilles et les pierres peuvent casser nos os, mais les mots casseront nos coeurs.
(thank you franky)

oh yeah...this is the coolest club for writers, personally, on D.A. :iconburn-p0etry:
:iconwithoutfaith:
Yay =D

Sorry, didn't mean to put you on the spot :(

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