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With time,
You'll begin to understand
A concept you'll never fully grasp
Until it breaks you of any heart you once had.
A lesson learned through countless weeks,
Dotted with untold fantasies
And miserable eternities,
Through summers well spent
Dreaming of what could have been.
But when years spent under servitude
To a crown only you can see
Comes promising not salvation
But a letter of resignation,
You'll wonder if souls can be reclaimed
Or if it's possible to go on unwhole,
When such simple words
Could stitch up every wound conceived
From the seperation of two worlds.
Heavens discovered, hells endured
And unknown worlds navigated,
All due to one wrong turn
That brought elation and despair
And a realization that time's almost out.
With time, histories will be forgotten
And with time,
Time will go on.
©2004-2009 ~withoutFaith
:iconwithoutfaith:

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Experimenting... :)
Tell me what you think, and of course, your interpretation of it.

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:iconbulimicdemon:
Whoa. I don't know what to say... :+fav: It makes me think, and I've read it multiple times... :) Very nice job!
:iconwithoutfaith:
=D Dude I love it when you comment on my work
You appreciate it so much and you say just enough to make me smile, which doesn't happen often with comments :hug:
I'm so glad you enjoy my writing, and I'm very excited that you chose to :+fav: one my writings!
:iconcorinthia:
This is a very good poem. I like it. Great Job!

--
You must have chaos in your soul
To give birth to a dancing star
~Nietzche
:iconwithoutfaith:
Thank you very much! I'm very glad you enjoy it... especially since I can get a frank opinnion from you.
:iconbulimicdemon:
You are very welcome, you deserve it!
:iconmillena:
i just cant comment poems, but i realy liked it when i was reading it

--
I will be watching you . . .
Millena
:iconwithoutfaith:
Thank you very much :)

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